Come Into My World...
by Thomas Nevin Huber ©1992
Hiruku Tachikawa woke up feeling horribly alone.
It was quiet. For the first time as far back as he could remember, it
was
quiet. He listened for a moment, then
rose and turned on the ancient stereo. No sound filled the room. He
keyed in the search function for any local stations, then frowned as
the
tuner scanned first one
band, then another, then another, and then another. Flipping the
modulation
to A.M., he heard the hiss of unfilled airwaves and touched the search
function again.
The tuner muted the hiss, then scanned across the limited frequencies
assigned to low-fidelity news and talk. Nothing. Absolutely nothing.
He walked to the window and slid the vertical blinds
aside, opening to his view the overpopulated city that spread out below
his tiny window. It didn’t look
overpopulated this morning. It didn’t look populated at all.
Rain pounded against the plastic glass. Dark clouds
skittered against an angry sky. A chime sounded behind him, reminding
him
that he had a duty. He was no
useless executive, consigned to some windowed view of his city with
nothing to do. People did care about him and his job.
So, even though it was deathly quiet, he prepared
his breakfast and ate it. The previous night’s paper was thin and spoke
of a terrible economic disaster. It didn’t
matter. His job was secure. His company was profitable. His job was
important. He would continue working even if he was the last man on
earth.
He turned to the sports section. There wasn’t any.
He turned to the market section. The market was closed for some obscure
reason. They didn’t say what it
was. That didn’t matter. He didn’t have any investments, only
curiosity.
He turned to the funnies and laughed at the sad
jokes they told. Then he finished his breakfast and departed for work.
He meticulously checked the locks to his flat. They
were secure, making the tiny apartment he called home safe. He was
alone
in the hallway. He was alone in the
building. He stood very, very still and the lights in the hallway,
sensing no movement, dimmed. He turned and they brightened. There was
someone
there – him. So
the world continued to turn on its axis and life went on, because he
was there. Life continued and he had his job.
The streets of the overcrowded city weren’t crowded
this morning. He walked quickly because no one blocked his path or
moved
in front of him or pushed him
one way or another. The street was empty, except for a stray dog.
Funny, he thought. The dog looked confused,
lost. It started for him, wagging its tail. But Hiruku hissed at it,
and
the dog put its tail between its leg, turned, and
fled.
Hiruku shrugged it off. The dog was unimportant.
The festival was past and so the dog was nothing once more. Someday,
the
dog might find its way into
someone’s oven and then become a meal in a society that had little
meat to share.
The walk was a short one. Hiruku turned into his
building and marched sharply over to the elevators. All but one stood
open,
so he had his pick. No waiting for
one this morning, not for Hiruku. The ride was quick. No stops to let
people on or off. Just him. The fifteenth floor wasn’t too high, but
height
didn’t matter when
there were a lot of people. Today, with no one but him, he was going
to be early.
But not early enough.
“Well!” came the sharp comment. “I thought you’d
never arrive!”
It was Kyoshi, his customer – his only appointment
this morning. The man was almost always impossible. But not today.
Today
was the day for Kyoshi to enter
retirement.
Hiruku bowed deeply at the waist and unlocked the
door to the suite. Kyoshi nodded his head slightly and rushed inside.
“Where is it?” he demanded.
Hiruku raised his hand toward the only door at the
end of the waiting room. “It is ready,” he said, ignoring honor for
such
an honorless person.
Kyoshi went inside, then returned almost
immediately.
“There are two left open. Which is mine?”
“You have the honor to choose.”
“Ah, then I choose the furthest.”
“You are welcome.”
Hiruku followed the impertinent one into the room
and went immediately to the controls.
“When does it start?” Kyoshi wanted to know.
“It is ready,” Hiruku repeated.
“Then . . . ?”
Hiruku reached under the console and brought out
the helmet. One remained behind, waiting. The rest were in use by the
others.
“Please,” he directed Kyoshi to lay on the empty
couch.
He plugged the helmet’s cable into the head of the
couch.
“Hurry,” he was urged.
Hiruku ignored the impertinent one. As always, he
checked and rechecked and rechecked again, to make sure all was in
order.
Nothing must be amiss.
Then, he brought the helmet down, over Kyoshi’s
head.
“Ah. . .” The sound escaped from slightly parted
lips.
And all was quiet in the world.
Hiruku walked quickly back to the console and
brought
out the second helmet. He plugged the helmet’s cable into the head of
the
only remaining empty couch.
Then he repeated the procedure and checked and rechecked and rechecked
again, to make sure all was in order. Nothing must be amiss. Then,
taking
one last look
around, he climbed onto the couch and settled back, relaxing. Slowly
and carefully he lowered the helmet over his own head. Deliberately,
slowly,
and completely.
Darkness surrounded him.
Silence was quieter than the silent city.
Feeling was . . . gone.
He was . . . disconnected. And into the world they
called virtual reality.
There was nothing and he was nothing.
He wasn’t even a last man on the earth, for there
was no longer anyone, anywhere.
Not even anyone to . . .
. . . read . . .
. . . this . . .
"Come Into My World"
was the first short story I did outside the Star Spawn “universe.” I’m
placing it first in this collection because it was the first that was
published.
Writing the story only took a couple of days.
I was originally inspired to write this little story while I was
reading
and critiquing another short story
written by another technical writer, Ralph Rumpf. One of the lines
in his story struck me and I said to myself, “Hey, there’s a story
there.”
The result (which you have just read) has a flaw
that most readers miss: where are the children? A few years ago, I
decided
that the story could
actually serve as the introduction for a novel, which I have
tentatively
titled, “The Survivor” and provide a tribute to my
favorite
author, George
R. Stewart (Earth Abides, 1949).
So where is the story going from here and where
are the children?
They were left behind. One child, a boy about
seven years old, got tired of crying for his parents. He went looking
through
the city and didn’t find
anyone. A door was open, and he went in. Inside, he found food –
enough to keep him alive. Using his wits and a drive to stay alive, the
boy (I haven’t
chosen a name for him yet) finds other children and brings them
together as adulthood is forced upon them. I’m toying with the idea of
putting the boy
and a girl together as a “new” Adam and Eve, but that’s been done
before. Where I’m going with this, I’m not sure and I don’t know if it
will be a
juvenile story or something that really is more suited for “mature”
audiences. After all, life can be brutal.
Back to Short Story Page